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Good work, just a few thoughts from initial impressions. I thought the male voice was used a bit too frequently in the first two minutes of the song- also, it bothered me somewhat that he wasn't saying anything intelligible. Seemed to get in the way of listening to the progression of the themes.
In the beginning to mid parts- some of the changes in themes could have been better transitioned- some changes seemed a little abrupt.
Also, almost two pieces. The female part could stand on its own as a song.
These are not criticisms, as I thought the piece was professional and imaginative.
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