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11-17-2003, 05:45 PM
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Tell me what ya think
All, I need some opinions on how to improve my site.
NOTE: Great thanks to PanamaRed  SDMF Computers You can just post your suggestions here, please don't email SDMF Computers. Thanks. |
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11-17-2003, 06:11 PM
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Telcom Tech
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Needs a picture of a computer or something right under the SDMF logo in that white space between it and the beginning of the text below....
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11-17-2003, 06:41 PM
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you spelled "rediculous" wrong. you spelled it ridicules. as far as i can tell, foreber is not a word. and you would probably want a comma after foreber, otherwise it is a sentence fragment, and merciless does not really make sense in that sentence. i really like the layout though, and i agree with ktkendall
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11-17-2003, 07:08 PM
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Thanks I'll make the changes check back later.
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11-17-2003, 08:19 PM
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K Made the changes
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11-17-2003, 08:34 PM
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sorry, my fault, here i am correcting your english and i can't even spell "ridiculous" correctly. sorry about that. while i like that graphic, i think that the website is too serious for it.
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11-17-2003, 08:44 PM
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also, on your guestbook page i would take out the top part saying what it is.
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11-17-2003, 08:44 PM
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I agree. Altho the pic is funny, you need something more serious for business image.
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11-17-2003, 08:49 PM
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I'll find a better one. Thought u guys might have liked it for a laugh
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11-17-2003, 09:09 PM
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oh yeah it is funny, but i don't think it is what you wanna go for in a business website. when a customer came, they might lose that image they had of you being a professional.
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11-17-2003, 09:11 PM
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Mondsreitersmann
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Want a laugh, cndref?
(But don't use it on your site,  )
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11-17-2003, 09:16 PM
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LOL. Hear that everynight
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11-17-2003, 09:20 PM
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bummer, its got the infamous red x through it. must have been funny
craig edit: or i just needed to hit refresh |
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11-17-2003, 09:45 PM
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Are you going to add more info about your business, specifically what services and products you offer, and how to aquire them and perhaps your prices, and your warranty???
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11-17-2003, 09:50 PM
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Ktkendall knows his business!!!
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11-17-2003, 09:54 PM
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My opinion for a business type webpage would be to be a little more professional. The small paragraph underneath your main pic on the home page should be a little more appealing.
I am not saying it is bad, but to me it just appears to be a little to casual. Hope you understand what I am saying. Other than that you will be upgrading and changing all of the time... Believe you me, you will be changing a lot in the next few weeks. I remember I did when I first taught myself to write HTML and create a webpage! I like the start. Good luck!
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11-17-2003, 10:04 PM
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Thanks guys. I was reading on how to write the stuff all day today. Most of it is ctrl c/v. Thanks for the help. I plan on help a couple of family friends and give them a couple of business cards to give out. Plus I hope to have a catalog page displaying a bit od hardware available. Sound Good. Plus average systems for the average Joe/Gamer/HARD CORE GAMER
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11-17-2003, 10:05 PM
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If anyone has a great pic for me that would be great, I can't seem to find a decent one.
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11-17-2003, 10:05 PM
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Feel free to sign the guest book aswell
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11-18-2003, 09:41 AM
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The easiest thing you can do to make any website look more professional is run all your text through a spell and grammar checker.
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11-18-2003, 12:30 PM
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Thanks glc
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